RE: The Health Effect of Smartphones Addiction - Part 2

over 2 years ago

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Hi, interesting post and I guess you put much effort in it?

May I suggest, and this is an only my personal view:

Making post more personal with your own photos
Too much sources... And as curator they would have to check for plagarism wich is not easy and very time consuming. So I think most would skip it and go to the next boost request (and there are many requests)
Still I dont know, did you really write this or did you just take parts to rewrite from there.
Put in more of your personal thoughts, this text is rather made for a magazine and most hivians (I think) will not really read it.

And the communities you post in.... If you see, a community is not really interacting with you, go on and look where the people are wich can become longtime likeminded hive friends
But always read community rules, some dont accept bilingual for example

Only my thoughts, hope helpful

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@biyimi 69

over 2 years ago (Edited)

Hello thank you but will like to point out some things.

All this were originally written by me. Those sources are there probably just for me to get more enlightenment about what I want to write and the rule of the community is for you to put in some references source to your article.

I don't really have a correct phone to take my personal pictures yet so I need to resort to unsplash pictures which is copyright free

Also the rules of the community is well checked and I followed every rule to the maximum.

So all the post are from my personal thoughts.

I know the community that accept bilingual and those that did not and i follow the rules. Take for examples this particular community, they can accept bilingual but i just choose not to use bilingual.

So all the point you mentioned in this comment, i have made sure i attended to these point even before posting them.

Probably it is the long queue in the boosting request. After that, i can tell you there is nothing wrong from my own side.

Thank you

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@beeber 73

over 2 years ago

Wouldnt had voted if I had thought its not yours. ☺️

Maybe write Something like this in the post:

All this were originally written by me. Those sources are there probably just for me to get more enlightenment about what I want to write and the rule of the community is for you to put in some references source to your article.

Because from outside view from a curator, not knowing you, it might look different. Just believe me, I know my fellow curator friends, its not because of the long queue. But the competition within the boosted posts.
!ALIVE

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