RE: Win a Magic Wishbone

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Thank you for sharing this clever, unique story with us on The Ink Well. Great use of the prompt and your hook is really good, too. Jimmy really wants to believe in wishes that come true, but he understands that the “Turkey Man” is a shyster. Jimmy decides to engage with the raffle-seller against his better judgment, because sometimes we’d all like to believe in magic, even for a moment. Jimmy gets his wish, while the opportunist loses his quarter - very nicely done!

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