Josua's invention

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My name is Josua and I am a scientist, since I am 19 years old I have been conducting a study in which the whole humanity will be benefited, I found an atom capable of allowing humanity to live normally on other planets, this work although I was doing it alone, I counted on my trusted friend Peter, who although he knew nothing about the subject was always there, supporting me. I could not have a better friend.

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Lately I had noticed Peter very strange, it seemed that something was bothering him, but since my research was almost finished I had no time to think about what was happening to him, I supposed that the stress of my day to day life had infected him. But in the end I overlooked it. One night I noticed that I had finally finished my invention, the oxygen atoms I had created were able to clean in just 24 hours the oxygen of any planet and made it habitable, that invention was the best advance that science could have, I celebrated proudly with my friend Peter that great achievement that took me years, then we went home, and in the morning I had to organize everything for my invention to be made public.
The next morning, when I get to my lab, all the stuff is all over the place, glass on the floor, broken computers, my laptop that I had carelessly left in the office was gone, "what am I going to do" I thought to myself. I had been robbed, my research was there, when I checked the compartment where the atoms were, they were not there. The only one who knew that I had already finished my experiment was Peter, my hand was shaking as I dialed his number to call him, I could accept that I was robbed, lose all my work but I could not accept that it was my trusted friend who did it.

When I finally managed to make the call, I hung up immediately because my gaze was fixed in one place, it was the billboard, Peter had left a note that said: "I'm sorry". That's all he said, those words were enough for me to know that it was him who stole my work. I could not believe it, we had more than 8 years of friendship, he was the only friend I had.

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After that bitter impression, I cleaned the laboratory, although they took away something important that I worked with which was my laptop, my father had taught me since I was a child that in matters of money and work I could not trust anyone, that laptop only had parts of the research, in the other computer that they had left also had another part but not even putting the two together would have the exact way to make the atom that had taken me so much work, the complete experiment I always wore it on my neck. It was a gift my mother gave me, a necklace that hid a small memory where I had all my work.

It is true that Peter took the atoms but I could not do anything, in my brain and in that small memory was the way to make them work. I only had to wait a couple of days for Peter to be accused of being an impostor, the other scientists realized that he had not created the invention because he did not have the complete research and did not know how to make them work. I was present at that meeting and I stood up and proclaimed myself the owner of the invention and showed the evidence to prove it. I didn't look at Peter for a second, that's the least he deserves for violating my trust.

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Right now, I'm on a spaceship, we're heading to Mars to test the molecules I invented. Despite what Peter did I didn't press charges against him, the worst punishment someone can have is to know that you lost something very valuable, trust and that is never regained. I for one am on a direct flight to where I wanted to go, no one could stop me from fulfilling my dreams, this is the beginning of my new reality.

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Nice and intriguing history from beginning.
Good and fair end for the protagonists!

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Thanks for taking the time to read it, I'm glad you liked it. Regards.

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Trust broken in a harsh manner cannot be repaired. Peter did the worst thing and got his reward for it.

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It is true, trust is like a treasure that we must take care of because if we lose it, it is difficult to recover it, thanks for your comment, greetings.

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I think it might be nice to go to Mars especially with the formula for clean oxygen in your spacesuit. Entertaining 🤗❤️💕❤️🤗🤗

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Yes thank you, our imagination can take us anywhere, thank you for your comment, greetings.

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Betrayal is the ultimate sin. There are very few people in this world who will transgress on this level. You give us a story that encompasses the ultimate, but you still leave us with something positive to digest. Nicely formatted!
Please be sure to support other authors, they rely on you.

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Betrayal is a mistake that can generate distrust in others, but not all people are the same, and even if it causes pain we can be sure of something, if we trust ourselves we can move forward. Thank you for the compliment and I will continue to strive to follow your suggestion.

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He made the right decision listening to his mum because he would have lost his entire life work if he didn't.

You really can't completely trust someone especially one who is piggy backing you without anything really going for him.

These sets tend to grow insecure, greedy, easily lured by good promises, and of course, this leads to betrayal of some sort.

Great story, thanks for sharing. I learned a lot.

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Our parents are the first people who give us encouragement and confidence, hence the importance of good communication, is what as a mother I am striving to do, and although it is a fictional story I wanted to add that detail that occurs in most families. Thanks to you for your support and comment.

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In the end you leave us with an intriguing cliffhanger. very good story with science fiction on board. thanks for sharing.
Happy day.

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I'm glad you liked it from start to finish. Grateful for your appreciation

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One's trust should not be betrayed because once we betray, will forever be distrusted. It's a very interesting story. I enjoy your story

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You are very right, unfortunately we live in a world where we daily observe that misfortune, both in the family, in the community, at work and in many places, what we must do is not to act that way and if they betrayed us not to pay with the same coin. Greetings

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Your appearance in the public, the claim and the shame & humiliation you gave to Peter were good enough to cause damage to his life.

We learn lessons everyday, we've always been told not to trust anyone no matter how close.

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It was something he sought out himself, perhaps he thought his friend would not recognize his support and somehow reward his help. Some people learn the hard way, but it was not Josua's intention to harm his friend, it was Peter's actions as a wise man once said, you reap what you sow.

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I was so shocked when I found that Peter destroyed their trust and relationship for 8 years because of something like this, at least there are valuable lessons learned by the protagonist

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That's right, at the end of the bad and sad things that happened to Josua, he took the positive and did not get revenge from his friend, it was enough the unhappiness of having been discovered with his lie.

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I liked your story and I thought it was great that he followed his mother's advice, betrayal is something really repulsive and in my case I do not easily forgive the one who betrays me, it is really difficult to overcome a betrayal and more if you love that person. Thanks for your story.

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I agree with you, a betrayal is very difficult to forgive, and you know something I admire those who manage to overcome such a situation, the key is because they do not hold grudges and learned the meaning of the word forgiveness. Thank you for your valuable comment.

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Betrayal hurts so much. You are so softhearted for not pressing charges. Your father's advice is the way to go. Never trust anyone.

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Josua showed that he really trusted and loved his friend, unfortunately Peter learned it late, when he had already done the damage, although it seems impossible to trust others, remembering that we also make mistakes and can fail, can give us a different optics between trusting or not.

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That's true. Mistakes do happen and we may have to mend fences and forge ahead. The kind of trust and the way it was breached got a lot to do in trusting the same person again. Perhaps, I agree that we can't really love without trusting in some instances no matter how isolated.

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It is definitely so, losing someone's trust is the hardest lesson we can receive in this good. For it is something so valuable. Enjoy your story and characters!!! Congrats, good job!!!

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Thank you for taking your time to read the story and comment, I am pleased that you liked it, which encourages me to continue striving to make good content, greetings and success.

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