RE: This is Just To Say

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I read this the other day and finally my schedule allows me to make a thoughtful comment. (I was Inkwell previously 🙂)

it was so
so hard
and so cold

How many of us have had to give up on relationships...romantic or otherwise...because they can be no more? We have to throw them away. We have to draw ourselves up and move on. Whether the distance is interstellar or merely a matter of miles and time, the relationships become hard and cold--or unbearable.

Your writing is beautiful. Sophisticated. And yet, it is about the simplest, most basic experiences. We love, we promise, we separate, we move on--somehow. We will

attempt a final goodbye to the feelings that will threaten to tug

Great writing. You obviously do not appreciate boundaries, neither physical nor artistic. Keep testing them :)



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You obviously do not appreciate boundaries, neither physical nor artistic.

You got me in one there!

I was thinking the same - it's not necessarily about physical distance across literal space, but the distances between us when we go our separate ways, in this case, due to perhaps other passions or committments. Thanks so much for coming back as yourself - it means a lot. I'm so grateful for HIve for allowing me a safe and loving space to test my artistic boundaries, with boundless acceptance!

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