RE: Retribution: Head in Cloud
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I used to be twisted perhaps. I am unsure if I will ever recapture it.
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I used to be twisted perhaps. I am unsure if I will ever recapture it.
Yes, what I've read of yours is more linear than these pre-stroke stories, especially this one. Do you find that? There are turns in your posts now, but not so many twists, if that makes sense.
It does make sense. I think it is because even these stories are largely freewrites, so I map it out as I go, but could hold much more of the line in my head, as well as the direction. I am slower now.