RE: The Weave

For some reason that painting strikes me as you on the way to work 😜

Thankyou for sharing it - yes, in an extended narrative I would weave in imagery just like this painting. There was a lot of mythic, archetypal elements I really wanted to 'weave' in but in the hour before dinner I just couldn't pull it off and didn't want to waste my whole life on it.

Thanks for recognizing that it belonged in another time - that's what I wanted to achieve, not necessarily the future but a side present. I did want that old school sci fi vibe but I just lose the will to refine and edit it the way I normally would.

It's the old school, science rational objective narrator I am missing here I think. Its only upon waking to it I realize how I want to rewrite it. More Bradbury even would work.