RE: The Wanderer

The first thing that catches your attention about your story is how you mix science fiction with an ancient art that seems to have stagnated in time, but you give it new life with technological advances from a not so distant future. I really liked this part, it was very clever.

The story's narration envelops us and makes us imagine ourselves in that world full of technology, belief and mysticism. Lohan's character very credible and he is the one who takes credit for the story. Excellent work.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Good day.